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I think I hope you draw and write more of her. I'm serious. She seems a little more salty than your usual characters and a femdom wouldn't be a bad addition to keep all these bois in line. Or she's the last survivor of her tribe on the island Nab and his friends end up on...
-tbj

Damn... that's some Lovecraft right there. That's horrifying and really impressive.
-tbj

How did I miss this one?! He's so beautiful, but the cinching, but that face, but those cords look super uncomfortable, but that pouch... -tbj

One thing that might help is, you know those games that release as chapters? The developers can't make a whole game at once, but they can progressively make a lot of smaller games that tell a larger story. Like I said, get one tiny quest (just an example) done, then reassess. Do you want to flush it out more? Change the ending? It's good? Move on to the next chapter.

You can even write it as a serial so each level ends on a little cliffhanger. The most important part of any game is the story. The game has to serve the story and be an appropriate vehicle. Most games aren't really innovative (Portal is like half an FPS) - except in the storytelling, which you do exceptionally well.

Write a small story you want to tell. Where is hot little Helmut trying to go here? You've got something started here, maybe see if you can salvage it? Helmut is Red Riding Leotard who's trying to get to Martin's studio to take pictures. The Big Bad Wolf(ie) is stalking him. There's three little quests - one is getting a bottle of booze so you learn a shortcut out of the cave, one rewards you with a new leotard, and one gets you a bottle of lube. A few extra NPCs for fun dialogue, and you're done. The three items affect a couple of completion states - no shortcut means you're hot and bitchy when you finally get to Martin's (so nobody wants to fuck you), no new leo means you have to use the one you've been traveling in (so Martin and the Wolf don't find you as attractive, meaning only solo naughtiness), and no lube means no porn or a BJ at most. If you get all three, Martin photographs an amazing sex scene that makes Helmut rich and funds his magic studies.

I have the exact same problem I *think* you are, and fighter pilots call it "target confusion". There's so many targets that you freeze up from indecision. Don't let yourself think you're going to make Skyrim. You're telling a short story with a simple game. The main reason to play is the art and the story, two things you excel at which can elevate a simple game. Hell, imagine the different artwork for each ending to unlock? Also, if you can figure out a slut gauge, that gives you a super secret ending because each encounter makes Helmut more slutty so the final scene can be even hotter. Maybe Martin joins in. Then, later, you can use the little leotard fetch quest to pick multiple outfits, which means more pictures to unlock. Maybe add an extra quest between the first two for pacing... get the frame of something you can build on.

I'll stop talking about it now and go back to watching Helmut's sexy walk animation. -tbj

This is going to be long and I'm sorry. I don't know how to get paragraph breaks in this comment system, so I extra apologise for the length.

Don't worry about characters, and it might be hard for a lot of people to express what's good about an unfinished game because they don't understand what does into making one. Like walk speed, for example. That's something no players ever think of with game design, but they always notice when it's bad, even if they don't know quite why it sucks. Or the walk animation in general. It's seriously hot. I'd play a game that's just making him walk to places. My suggestion, and feel free to tell me to shove it up my ass, is to figure out what kind of story you want to tell, first and foremost. The type of story dictates the type of game. Portal wouldn't work as a side-scrolling platformer. Then plot out a simple story that can be added onto. Not just later content, but also adding an extra fetch to a good quest story that deserves to be fleshed out more, or would work as foreshadowing later. But that all comes way after. Then make just a "vertical slice".

Plot out a simple quest - Go inside what looked like a cave outside but is an abandoned temple inside, talk to the dude at the end of the cave who has an interesting story but says he's sobering up but still too drunk to get to the tavern, go to the exit of the cave, uh-oh and earthquake has caused decorative statues to fall, cave is blocked by small statues that are falling down from above of naked big-dicked and/or big titted contortionists that look suspiciously like tetrominos (I'm just putting it here as an example). Clear the naked statues then proceed through the opening outside to see a sign saying X is to the left, tavern (or town) to the right. Go down the path to the tavern. Beefcake bara tavern owner says he'll part with a bottle if you can make it worth his while, but you have no money. Pick between "erotic contortion display", "vanilla contortion display because you're not that kind of boi", or "let the bartender empty his balls in you". One gives a bit of money and a pricer bottle, one gives a couple dollars and a less good bottle of hooch, and the last one gets you no money but the best bottle in the joint... and then you maybe add in a hidden slutty meter so that, if it's high enough, you have the unlocked option of servicing the whole bar which gets you all the money and several good bottles. Also, maybe the slut meter is a good idea, but a pain to integrate right now, so just put a note in the dialogue tree "Hidden Option:" and claim it's just to give people a taste of that feature - then do or don't implement down the road. You can represent it in a VN style to make it easy, just having different static images changing to scripted dialogue with button presses to continue. Then, go back and give the guy his booze and learn a hint... that doesn't have to mean anything because you end it there. It's enough to put on a shareware disk and get people interested. I can't remember if I've talked about it before, but there's a game series I'm obsessed with called "Corruption Of Champions" and it's a text-based, click options, adventure games full of all kinds of delightful porn. If it was me, I'd start with a game like that, that does still have static graphic action shots, or a VN style blended with a side-scroller. It doesn't have to be complicated because the point is to tell the story. COC has a couple dialogue puzzles and gem puzzles that are really fun that they worked them into a text adventure.

The important part is telling the story YOU want to tell so you stick with it. You want to tell X story, and you know you want a couple of mini games that you like. Guys like Henry Darger and James Hampton are two of the most fascinating artists in history, and rightly lauded, who basically didn't show anyone what they were doing and were totally (voluntarily) unknown in their life. They just had a passion they had to express. Patrick Nagel was about as commerical as you get, and he certainly worked for pay, but you can tell he just liked the challenge of design so he was always making what he wanted. You are no less an artist, so be as decadent as you want. We're here not to treat you like a vending machine, rather your artistic vision is one we all love. We just want to see what have to show us next.

You can then take it and start fleshing it out when the muse strikes you - I would start with an actual outline of a short story you want to tell. And, like we all learned from Will Eisner's "Comics And Sequential Art", don't erase or try to make something work. If it's weird, focus on something else because editing and creating are two different mindsets and you can't accomplish anything while trying to accomplish both.

Also, not for nothing, but I read the other comments here, especially Shifty, so I know I'm not the only one who genuinely loves what you do. Just make the little quest that lets you express the idea of what you're doing, with a little beginning, middle, and end. I really hope I'm not being an asshole. I'm encouraging you because I think this is something you really want to do. Maybe you finish the vertical slice and decide you don't like making games. That's cool, too. Just get that one bit done and worry about the rest later.
-tbj

I can't tell if it's intentional, but is his stance supposed to resemble Mowgli during the elephant march? The knees are a bit much, but that's so hot. I also really like "Cummingbird" for that pose... and the song sounds like an underrated Primus B-side. I think it came out great! -tbj

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Amazing Foldmigo, looks as hot and sexy as he seem to feel doing that stretchgasm.

I'm sure I'm not alone with really loving the recent string of more explicit art you've been making Yuni. Thanks so much for creating such sexy content for us all to enjoy.

Wow, amazing!

Ass like this next to the face looks awesome
I want to slap it thru my screen!

„Das hast du gut gemacht, junger Adler“...
...da bin ich gespannt, wie die Stammesgeschichte weiter gehen wird, voll natürlicher Erotik - dafür hast Du einen siebten Sinn !
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“You did well, young Eagle”...
...I'm excited to see how the tribal history will continue, full of natural eroticism - you have a seventh sense for that!

I'm surprised at how good that song sounds, and Leslie looks so majestic yet erotic!!

Awesome!!

Imagine the pose one would have to be positioned at in order to fuck him while he is bent like that haha

Fuck~ that scene sounds so hot! Lichard's such a lustful skeletal stud he might overshoot his chest and ribs cumming like that, it'd be a shame if most of his thick loads shot over his head and missed his naughty fetishized body. Perhaps he could empty those enchanted balls directly into his own mouth, his powerful cumshots splurting out the sides of his mouth onto his cock, balls, chest and ribs! He cums so much it'd flow down his bones and pool over his tiny waist and tummy. I think he's such a lusty demon the overstimulation of his soft girly lips slick with his own cum gliding up and down his massive dick while his long tongue laps up the flat super sensitive head of his cumming cock would be too much. The addition of his hero toy would let him really push the limits of his lust, I sure hope you make lots more art Yuni. If you wanna supply the art I can write the book xD

I'm catching your Frisbee -tbj:
youtu.be/M43wsiNBwmo?si=RiBKCCloUTDvdgdZ

I've said it before, and I'll say it again, you need some muscle to balance the rubber, or maybe even enhance it. I always love when you bring a little beefcake to the table. -tbj

I'm looking at this again, and I would love to see more art from Yunia. I don't even know if marble is strong enough to support itself with that thin of a waist, let alone how you'd close a metal band around it... It's interesting to see our genres of art, but interpreted through cultures that had contortion, actual magic, and futuristic alien tech. It seems from implication in your stories that in modern times a lot of art is expressed by actual people since technology gave them the abilities to do what previously could only be depicted through art. You do these fascinating glimpses into your world and I hope you do more than just glimpses in the future. :)
-tbj

*waits patiently in a liquid helium shower for "Boy With A Pearl Cockring"* -tbj